Lets all write one together :)

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Lets all make a storey together, I will start a chapter, then someone continues it with chapter 2 etc...
This story is called:
I wish

Chapter 1: I wish I had a friend

I wish I had a friend, Everyone else has friends except me and it's not fair, What IS wrong with me? WHY Don't I fit in? I wish I knew. Yes of course I'm not the prettiest girl in the world but, that doesn't matter! At least I'm not like other girls that all just think about boys and fancy clothes. I don't care what I look like. Anyway some girls are ugly AND fat, they have friends, SO WHY DON'T I HAVE ANY! ITS JUST NOT FAIR!
I'm on my way too school now. Slowly dawdling down the road, I see some of the popular kids, Sally, Kaytee, Lauren, Ellie, all them lot, and there queen Jayne. There probably going down to the field where all our lot hang out when they skive. If only I could skive, I want to skive, but I can't, I'm not daring enough, walking past those three I see a seriously fit guy, He's looking at me, Looking impressed, No, No he WASN'T looking at me, he was looking at Jayne, Everyone looks at Jayne! But I can't help feeling flustered, as my chubby cheeks flush he winked at me...
Rewind
HE WINKED AT ME
He likes me!
No, It was probably just a friendly wink...
No-ones ever given me one of those before.
"Hey you, Raspberry!" He shouted. Yes, Raspberry, It's a STUPID name!
I turned around looking to find his dazzling smile, him beckoning me over, I know I shouldn't but like his beckoning fingers controlling me, I slowly go and stand with the gang

[Addie]

Chapter 2: Am I The New Queen?

So they started talking to me and Ellie asked me ‘’Wanna be in our gang?’’ ‘’Me? Really? Or is this just a joke so they can push me into the wasps and bee hive again’’ I thought. ‘’Yea ok’’ I replied. So we all walked through the field and then the fit boy Joey asked me out. ‘’Yea!’’ I replied. So we started holding hands and skiving school. A couple of weeks later after we all been to the town and Jayne and all went home, I followed Jayne home. I knew it was wrong but she had a lot of scratches on her arm. I peered in the window and her mum and dad were shouting at her for being one minute late. ONE MINUTE past six was the time. Next I saw Jayne cleaning the house. ‘’Jayne must not be so perfect after all!’’ I thought. Then at school on Monday there was cheerleading tryouts. I tried and got in! And I was the captain. Me, Ellie, Keely and Jayne made it. But then I saw on Jayne’s arm and legs. She was bruised badly. Then the next day she wasn’t at school. Or the next day. Or the next. After six weeks I was told she moved. So then I was the gangs new Queen.

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Well cin as we've had no more feedback Imma do a Chapter [If ne1 rekons thts nt fair js tel me so]
Chapter 3: Joeys Confession
So I walked to school, I remembered me sad and lonely, a few weeks ago, i had changed so much, I looked around, the gang weren't on the field. So i went to the passageway, They weren't there either. So I popped along to school. Since I'd joined the gang, I'd only been to school a few times, So my new found popularity hadn't been registered. Then I saw a massive gang Around Joey and they were all shouting "Tell her!"
"Ok..." Said Joey, and the silence hushed as Joey looked terribly ashamed, and as I looked over, I saw Jayne in the corner, She was in her cheerleading outfit with... with MY captains badge on! her tiny hips moved as her evil smile and the glint in her eye stared at me. She was very very pretty but had an evil look! Oh no... I think I can tell what Joey was going to say, He opened his lips slowly...

[Addie]

Chapter 4- Jayne Is Back.

As Joey opened his mouth he said ‘’Look, Raspberry, Jayne is back. And she is the cheerleading captain and your dumped. Because me and Jayne go back out.’’ ‘’Oh and your not in our gang now. You may be a cheerleader. But find new friends’’ Jayne said. Then she kissed Joey. I ran away, far far away. I ran to a park and sat by the river chucking stones into the river. ‘’I’m going to drown myself’’ I thought. So i stood up and as i was about to jump in i felt someone breathing behind me. ‘’Don’t do it’’ the voice said. I turned around and there stood a girl around my age. ‘’Who are you?’’ I asked. ‘’I’m Carly.’’ She said. ‘’Hi, what are you doing?’’ I asked. ‘’I saw you going to jump in so I had to tell you no.’’ Carly said. After a couple of minutes I invited her to my house. ‘’It’s so nice to see Raspberry have another friend after what happened today.’’ My mum said. ‘’Come on Carly lets go to my room’’ I said. ‘’Yea ok.’’ She replied. So me and Carly ended up being best friends. Then one day I heard something. I heard that Jayne Was in hospital, and couldn’t be a cheerleader…..

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Cin as once AGEN no-ones intrested i'll do chapter 5
This shud b me n yoor story spork
But If ne1 wnts too join in yoo may
I hoped and hoped and hoped they would select me as temporary captain.
"Seeing as the fabulous, beautiful, Jayne is in hospital, after our memorial to her absence,We will choose a temporary captain, You have to eat breathe sleep Jayne, and cheerleading, Jayne, cheerleading, and you must visit Jayne everyday, Now I will show you some pictures of our poor Jaynes excellence
The pictures went on and alot of wannabes were gripped. After the memorial the temporary captain was read out... Raspberry Colton? What a daft name, where are you 'Raspberry'. I slowly stood up.
"OH MY GAWD, YOUR THE ONE WHO TRIED TO RUIN JAYNE! So how come she's requested you've taken her place?"
I happily ran over and plucked the badge from Ashlees fingers.
"Ugh"
I took Jayne some flowers in her hospital room, she was surrounded in cards, teddies, flowers, she was eating some chocolates that had written on the front "To my lovely darling Jayne, I wish I'd never gone with Raspberry, I will always love you, Lots of love, Joey" It pained me to see that message, i kept scanning it with my eyes. Then I saw a bit on the bottom.
P.S: I'm glad I kissed you when i was going with Raspberry, I'm sorry I didn't let it lead to more
That was it I couldn't take it I dropped the flowers, ripped of my captains badge and ran home, I locked my door and sat on my bed, practically eating my thumb and rocking back to back, I didn't want to talk to Carly, I didn't want to talk to mum, dad, not even myself, Why was it always me? How come I can NEVER win, I messed up, I should of walked off when Joey beckoned me, I should of known he was going to kiss Jayne when we were together
I SHOULD OF KNOWN
I wish I could go back to when I had no friends
I wish I wish I wish!

[Addie]

Yea me and ur storee lol!

Kaii, Chapter 6

So as i sat there on my bed i started writing a book amd called it ''Raspberry's Bad Childhood''. I wrote nine chapters then at 9pm i fell asleep. The next morning i woke up and my mum was making my breakfast. I got dressed and brushed my hair then ran downstairs. After i had ate my breakfast i went upstairs and i wasn't feeling so good. I just lay on my bed and i think i passed out. Then a couple of hours later i woke up in a hospital bed. ''Are you ok hunny?'' Mum asked. ''Yea, What happened?'' i asked. ''You passed out.'' she replied. ''But i brought your laptop for you.'' ''Thanks.But mum? Can you go back home and under my bed theres a sealed box and get that for me?'' i asked. ''Yea ok. Its only a ten minute walk, See you soon'' she said walking out. I looked across from me and i saw Jayne. It gets worse. She was kissing LYLE!....

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Chapter 7: I wish Joey was mine...

"Jayne.. What are you doing? Thats Lyle, You love JOEY" I screamed, I knew Joey needed a taste of his own medicine, but I couldn't bare to see me witnessing it.
"Honey, My days of popularity and being perfect are over now, I left everything. They've all left too now, I love Lyle now"
"W-wheres Joey?" I said, wondering if this was my chance to snatch him back.
"Things have happened darling, Joey.. he's... I don't know how to tell you this but..."
"THEN DON'T! ALL YOU DID JAYNE, YOU PULLED JOEY WHEN HE WAS MINE, YOU TOOK MY CAPTAINS JOB FROM ME AND MY BOYFRIEND, YOU'VE TAKEN EVERYTHING FROM ME! EVERYTHING! SO DON'T YOU 'Honey' AND 'Darling' ME! YOU SAY YOU'VE TURNED A NEW LEAF BUT KNOW ONE CAN FORGIVE YOU FOR WHAT SCUM YOU USED TO BE, YOU MAY BE GOOD NOW, BUT I'LL CATCH YOU OFF GUARD, AND WHEN I DO, IT'S PAYBACK TIME!"
"Look. Your going crazy! You still like Joey but you can't have him!"
"Why? I've slept with him before! Top that!"
"Listen honey, I went out with him for two years when you weren't even in the picture... Did you really think we hadn't slept together? You COULD have him... If he was alive..."
"You mean... No..."
Jayne nodded and tears started streaming down her cheeks, Lyle cuddled her closer.
"But, I love him! I LOVE HIM!" I got out of bed in my nightie, put on my slippers and ran to the graveyard, nurses, doctors tried to stop me, I had to see my darling... I had to find out if it was true...

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Chapter 8: The end.

They all went Pyscho and shot each other. Bang bang. The end

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[Addie]

Chapter 8- Jayne Will PAY!

So as i ran to the graveyard i saw Joey on the bench crying. I went up and sat beside him. ''Do you know what Jayne has been saying and doing?'' I asked. ''What!?'' He moaned. ''She said you were dead and she is kissing Lyle in the hospital!'' I said. ''Look. Jayne loves me. And i love her'' He said. ''Fine! Ill get proof.''I said But then, at that very moment when i walked away i passed out again. ''BerrY? Wake up'' I heard my mothers voice saying. ''You passed out.''. ''Again?'' I said. ''Yes, i brought this box you asked me to bring.'' My mum said. ''Thanks mum'' i said. ''Well i have work. And will come and get you in the morning.'' She said and walked away. I looked over and Jayne and Joey were hugging. ''Im gonna kill myself'' i thought. But then Carly walked in. ''Hey Berry.'' she said. She had brought me a Best Friend braclet. ''Thanks. And hey. Im really angry at the moment.'' I said. ''Whats up?'' she said. ''I just hate Jayne over there.'' i said. ''oh i have to go.I'll come back in an hour'' Carly said. ''Bye'' i said ''bye'' she replied. When Joey left i got up and went over to Jayne. ''What you think your doing?'' I said gritting my teeth. ''Well i have two boyfriends and may i point out Joey isn't dead!'' She said laughing. ''Thats it!'' I thought. So i took my arm and punched her in the nose...

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I sat with my arms wrapt around my knees in my bed. It was cold, the sheets were too cold to crawl under for comfort. I was in my own room now, to keep me safe they said. As they took me firmly by the arm. I was numb and hurt at the same time. Hot and cold.. I sat trembling and staring at the quilt.. Years of bullying and I'd almost forgotten it all over a boy... almost let all my suffering dissapear but she forced it back on me. I looked around this new surrounding, there was a medical supplies cupboard. I stared at it for a long while, and then stood, my feet hit the icy floor with slaps and i shuddered violently as i slipped across the floor, it was locked.. But now I was up I could see through the tiny glass window in my door, and almost exactly opposite my room was the nurses supplies station, I saw the boxes of needles, drugs the names I didnt understand, knives, bandages.. how ironic.. I thought to myself.. to die in hospital.

But, I thought, allowing myself one single tear of my terror to fall.. me.. or her?