Karnage The Klown

[Surfpunk]

This is my first alt in like 3 months and plus im not good at alts in da first place. But his name is Karnage the Klown who is a mix of a clown and a mime if your going to say anything please give me advice of how to improve it.

[ItsDave]

Needs a hell of alot more shading and where did the idea come from? 6/10

[Biseinen]

Needs:

Shading
To be saved in a better quality -Png or gif (not jpg...)
Alot more detail.

[Brycey90]

He needs to be standing on his shadow...Not it behind him...
Also needs a hell of a lot more shading!

[.:Subarusti:.]

needs loads of shading, and its wierd lol 4/10

[Lozzoling]

needs shading and much finer lines
1.9/10
ADVICE: save as .bmp