Poem For the competition

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I wonder if this is good or not. If you are disatisfyed then please Post back what changes i should do. Also is it long enouth?


Habboween!
Habboween comes close to all
Lurking closer and closer thru habbo hall.
Habbo's run for there lives
Holding there Furni and saving there hives

As the one called grim takes the key from the Door
The one that goes is jibbi Never to be seen no more.
They morn and cry for there fallen leader
But now there’s no point no one will see her.

This holiday isn’t to be seen as a bad holiday
As this will be held on the day Sunday
Which people will not see it as a day of rest
As little monsters will roam as a pest.

Superstition will rise on is very night
As you will see them everywhere in sight
Furniture will be out of stock
And all of the shops will have a bold lock

Mummies and zombies will run amuck
As people will see a black cat you will be in luck.
Not only will the monsters will run free
But superstition will run interrupting Me!

Nowhere to run nowhere to flee
Only for monsters and you to see
Scared from habbos as much as He
Who listens and watches behind a tree!

But habbo’s can be monsters too
It could be me or it could be you
Take scammers for example that makes you hide
But they aren’t scary but you know they lied.

Bat pictures, Pumpkins, spider web’s and candles
Make’s you hold onto rusty handle's.
But remember they are there for fun!
So why not buy some there a Big’un

But why not play games or go habbo trick or treating
Not waste your time going to a habbo meeting.
As go and browse the habbo night to be seen
And remember beware of Habboween!

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Edit- EvilBrandon :Dont double post,simply edit your previous post, post deleted
Ps, Don't edit my warnings.

[Simonac55]

Great poem! You have really great writting skills.

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Thanks Simonac.
I dont believe that I have that good skills yet for the poem has not much rhythme.
Sorry for that thou.