#4 Let´s Write One Together (No Rudeness)

[Addie]

Me and my five year old sister Emily were walking home from school when a man offered us candy. ´´How abouts some free candy?´´ He asked. ´´Emm.. Ok´´ Emily said. ´´How old are you?´´ He asked. ´´Im 11 and she´s 5.´´ I said. ´´Oooh Well go in the car.´´ He said. I knew that he wanted to kidnap us, So I picked up Emily and ran around the corner to my house. I explained to my mum and she phoned the police. After dinner there was a knock on the door. My mum went to answer it. ´´We´ve arrested a man called Damion Pattrenoid.´´ One women said. Then my mum called me and Emily over. The police man showed us a picture of Damion and Emily said ´´He has free candy he was going to give to me and my sister LuLu but she picked me up and ran home with me.´´ ´´So is this the man who tried to kidnap you?´´ A police man asked. ´´No. He wanted to give us free candy.´´ Emily said. ´´Yes he did.´´ I butted in. ´´Well his name is Damion `Patternoid and hes 58.´´ Davey (a police man) said. After they left me and Emily went into our room and played the X-Box. The next morning at school i heard the most dreadfull thing.

[Forest-Law]

apparently the man my life once met with - Damien Pettrenoid - was infamous. In fact his name wasn't Damien at all. Nobody knew his real name. He would make names up and travel town to town looking for young children to prey on. I stepped back from my crowd of friends who were discussing this and shut my eyes tight. I had had a bad night's sleep, don't know why. So I tried to think and during this course of thinking I remebered something. There was another shadow in the car. Was this another man? or just some fracture in my lost imagination? I didn't know. All I wanted was to see Emily. I ran to the primary part of our school, hurried into her classroom and looked around.

Emily wasn't there.

[Addie]

I let out a loud scream. Mrs.Whyte Emily´s teacher came in and asked what was wrong. ´´WHERES EMILY!?´´ I cried. ´´She left with a man named Damion´´ She said. I let out a scream and ran out after the car. I kept throwing stones at it until it stopped. Damion went into the shop. I opened the door and took Emily out. ´´Why did you go with him?´´ I cried to her. ´´He said his puppys needed a home´´ She cried. ´´Aw Emily come on´´ I said. I picked her up and ran home. But then

[Emicat]

I lost grip with Emily and fell to the floor. All I could remember was a loud bang and pain. The rest of my memory I want to forget. Because right there infront of me, Emily (*cough* my name too) was dragged by her collar by Damion and

[Addie]

Another man. I cried in pain and sadness. Until i saw a shadow. A girl around Emily´s age. She came up to me and hugged me, Then i relised it was Emily. ´´I ran away when they were buying ropes´´ Emily cried. ´´Thank god!´´ I cried. So as we ran home and told our mum and she phoned the police. Forty-Five minutes later the police came. They then arrested Damion and Johnathan Jakobo. (Who was fifty six.) That night Emily wanted to sleep beside me. ´´Im really scared´´She whispered. ´´Me too.´´ I replied. Then the next day at school i heard that a girl in Emily´s class (Jo-Jo) was kidnapped.