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    Default The Bullies - Chapter One

    Each minute was precious. No bullies to hurt Sam. No tears to flood down his cold, boned face. No passion to die.

    Sam woke up to a normal Monday morning. The room made him have shivers due to his wallpaper peeling off and a bit of blood was on the wall when he had a nosebleed from the bullies. Life wasnt what Sam called great. You know the saying " Live life to the full "..

    Sam's school life was pretty much the same as home. Sam didnt have much of a social life. He didnt mix in with the crowd at school due to him being very quiet and lonely.

    Sam walked down the normal wet, dirty, scrabby path to school. He knew something would happen today. Something happens every day. I mean, everyday.

    Chapter Two - 15.10.05

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    Ummm, try a few complex sentences?

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    Aha! Mwaahhahaha 7/9. HehHeh. But try more next time. :eusa_danc

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