Emily

[Addie]

This is about a girl and her misrable life. (I know half of my storys ave Emily but i really Lubb that name)

Chapter1- Growing up.

On Monday 12th October 1992 a beautiful girl was born. Her parents were named Jenny and Mark. She has a big brother Jamie who was born on 14th January 1985. When Emily was two her dad started drinking beer and was really angry towards her. When she started nursery at four she was always sitting in a corner watching all the other kids play and laugh. She didn´t have any friends so she just watched. But one day a new boy named Dylan started. He was just like Emily but a boy. He sat next to Emily and stared at the floor. ´´Hi, Im Emily´´ Emily said to him. ´´Im Dylan´´ Dylan said smiling. They really got on like brother and sister and Dylan was born on 12th October 1992.

Chapter 2- Starting school. On 14.10.05. Plz Comment

[Moth]

Pretty short for a whole chapter, but a good start.

Keep it up.

[Addie]

Thanks, I know its short Hmm. If someone posts ill do Chapter2 in a min

[Addie]

Chapter 2- Starting Primary1

As Emily´s mum and brother took her for her school uniform Emily saw Dylan. ´´Hi Dylan´´ She called out. ´´Hi Emily´´ Dylan called back. Them Emily´s mum pulled her into the shop. Her mum bought her a Green blazer, Green and black tarten skirt,Black shoes, white knee-high socks and a white shirt. The next week when Emily started school her brother took her. Her mum and dad started hating her for some reason. As her and her brother walked through the gates they headed to the classroom of Dalgety Bay Primary School. It was ok for a primary one classroom, It was brightly decorated too. Jamie just left Emily on her own and went home. So Emily hung her bag up and sat at a table. Then about an hour later Dylan came in with his parents. He ran up to Emily and asked ´´Hi weres your mummy and daddy?´´ ´´They don´t care about me.´´ She replied with a tear in her eye. ´´Sorry´´Dylan said. Their teacher Miss.Logan asked them to pick someone to sit next to. Dylan and Emily sat at a desk on their own at the very back.

I may continue tommorow lOl

[Addie]

Chapter 2- Starting Primary1

As Emily´s mum and brother took her for her school uniform Emily saw Dylan. ´´Hi Dylan´´ She called out. ´´Hi Emily´´ Dylan called back. Them Emily´s mum pulled her into the shop. Her mum bought her a Green blazer, Green and black tarten skirt,Black shoes, white knee-high socks and a white shirt. The next week when Emily started school her brother took her. Her mum and dad started hating her for some reason. As her and her brother walked through the gates they headed to the classroom of Dalgety Bay Primary School. It was ok for a primary one classroom, It was brightly decorated too. Jamie just left Emily on her own and went home. So Emily hung her bag up and sat at a table. Then about an hour later Dylan came in with his parents. He ran up to Emily and asked ´´Hi weres your mummy and daddy?´´ ´´They don´t care about me.´´ She replied with a tear in her eye. ´´Sorry´´Dylan said. Their teacher Miss.Logan asked them to pick someone to sit next to. Dylan and Emily sat at a desk on their own at the very back. When the teacher called names out for the children to intruduce themselves Emily was first. ´´So whats your name?´´The teacher asked. ´´Emily´´ Emily said looking into space. ´´And how old are you?´´ Miss.Logan asked. ´´Five´´ Emily then said. ´´Tell us a bit about yourself´´ Miss.Logan said. ´´My mommy and daddy and big brother Jamie don´t care about me and all i do is sit on my bed and write stories or draw. I don´t have any friends except Dylan and i live in Canada.´´ Emily said. ´´Well, I´m sure your mom and dad do love you´´ Miss.Logan said. ´´I know they don´t!´´ Emily said. So as Emily walked to her seat a kid tripped her up. ´´Better look were your going unless you tell your mommy and dad! Oh wait They HATE YOU!´´ The kid ´said. Emily got up and stared at him. Then without thinking she hit him. ´´ÉMILY!´´ The teacher shouted. Emily looked at the teacher and said ´´HE SHOULDN´T OF TRIPPED ME UP THEN!´´ ´´NO EXCUSES! IM SENDING A LETTER TO YOUR PARENTS!´´ The teacher shouted. As Emily went to sit beside Dylan a kid called Louise said ´´Emily, Don´t listen to them, I´m Dylan´s other friend, Louise´´ Emily just buried her head in her desk.

Whattaýa think? Ill do Chapter3 tonight :eusa_danc